Project Proposal - First Draft

This is my first draft of my project proposal, I need to be more clear of what the theme is that I'm exploring, this needs to be developed through some more research, I want to look into manifestos and artists inspiration more in order to get a substantial and clear plan for my project. I also need some more clear questions, exploring what I'm asking and what boundaries I'm pushing. I have gotten this feedback from my tutor working by email to communicate.